Monday, September 1, 2014

Simple


I'm a bat
A just born bat
Fallen on the cave floor
Am I afraid?
Yes.
But only
Until my predator
Ends it up.       
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Rachel Portrait by KOOKIMOON

6 comments:

  1. life
    if not
    for
    a
    brief
    snatch ---

    interesting last line
    i mulled it over a few...

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  2. I got last LINE right away!
    A whole life--less than a blink...
    (It's time to LIVE, Baby!)

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  3. Afraid until we can look at fear in the eye.

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  4. The simple truth is the most powerful....this is amazing Dulce!

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