Monday, January 27, 2014

Necking



You were my dream 
I was your swan
I melted in your lips
 
You longed for smiles
that so easily transpired
 swam
danced
vanished.



________________


To you all, my dear friends.
DD.



IMAGE: 
Leda and the Swan by Jery Hulewicz

12 comments:

  1. Thank you for this lovely gift ......

    ReplyDelete
  2. a bit bitter sweet on the smiles disappering
    but they too will return i imagine

    hiya dulce...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. B, You know that's my way with words and stuff :-)

      Delete
  3. A few nice words
    A few well placed thoughts
    And thus, a poem is born.
    Pleasant enough.
    Liking the picture!

    Dulce, you need more to practice

    .


    ReplyDelete
  4. So few beautifully chosen and assembled words, together with a painting that perfectly reflects the poem, Dulce.

    ReplyDelete
  5. True ... few makes big things some times
    thanks Aguja dear

    ReplyDelete

THANKS for reading and taking the time to give some feedback!
D.