Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Senseless


 
 
It’s a sense of…
It’s fright
Hidden in a place with no name

It’s harmful
but free
opaque

A meaning
not deciphered

I reach and
let go

Bare
if I try
 to convey
its importance to
nonentity

to myself.
 
 
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Posted for d'verse poets

IMAGE:  about pain and pleasureby

10 comments:

  1. Sometimes we are just not meant to know the meaning.

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  2. Often we just have to accept what is, without thinking too much about it.

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  3. i know the feeling...it is a bit of the mystery of life you know...there are these things we can not put our finger on...but know for sure we can feel them....

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  4. There are things we just know...without knowing how we do..

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  5. I was brought here by the image, thinking something had disappeared. And it ended up being the words that brought them back.

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  6. Wow, I love your poem. The indentations are very effective at creating a jumping-off-a-building visual. I love that you see yourself as a nonentity. Amen, sister.

    And what a gorgeous blog!

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  7. ...ah, if only we can live without weighing too much of anything... sigh...

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  8. yip, that's exactly how it feels...

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  9. Ma'am, you have "that way with words". Funny: in a speech, the pauses are SO important--the silence. A great part of music is the rests, the silences, creating sadness, grief, or excitement, thrills.

    Your blog posts display your own gift of spacing, (Ha! NOT "spaced-out!") which spaces sometimes say more than words. Really nice.

    You've nailed down human feelings of inadequacy, obscurity, nonentity, feeling "out-of-the-game", while being more "in the game" than ever. Great insight.


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  10. Second sight... premonition... omen... anything but superstition.

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