Sunday, February 17, 2013

feel like dancing





I don't

Best friend says it's there
but sleeping
in all
 its beauty
all.

What's really gone?

The blossom
lost
the skin flabby
the heat  off

Feel like
 closing my eyes
but  I don't
For  there's an alert

Need to see
what's going on

Feel like
giving in
but
I won't

Those were the days
when I wrote
and the feel was
feel like writing
feel like dancing
and I did

the blossom
reborn

the skin flabby
the heat on.

10 comments:

  1. smiles...to dance once more one must dance when they dont feel like dancing, like exercise...to get the flab away...not easy...

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  2. You're singin' my song ... dancin' my dance.

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  3. Enjoyed... Today's a good day.. I'd dance.

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  4. So easily that creative happy "switch," can be turned on and off...sometimes hard to turn on again. I can relate to the sentiments stated so well here. Thank you!

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  5. argh, i can definitely feel this.

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  6. Hey Dulce. So nice to see you and glad you shared a poem with Toads today.

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  7. This hits home. I dont' dwell though...I turn from the mirror and go on. Life still has a way of surprising me.

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  8. I always heard that it is what's inside a Peep is more meaningful than the outside.

    THEN I got a look at my gall bladder X-Ray!
    Peep!

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  9. We experience what we choose. I choose wonder, beauty, intensity, passion. In the end, the poem does too.

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  10. I love the photo and the yes, we must keep dancing :D

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